Scrivener 2.0 — The best just got better

Keith Blount has introduced a new version of Scrivener. The posting about Scrivener — A perfect program for dissertation writing is still my most read posting here, so I thought it might be worth a posting.

I have just downloaded it and from the first impression of it … it’s awesome. I was a little concerned that a ton of new features and formatting options might skew the idea of Scrivener (to concentrate on the words), but this does not appear to be the case. For example, the full screen writing mode still lets you focus only on the text.

As far as I can see, the features make the program more … powerful (aha! ;-) ). Seriously. Scrivener started as a nice, small, lightweight but extremely powerful application that lets writers focus on the words. Now it has tons of features and feels like a … battle cruiser. It’s powerful but it doesn’t get in the way of getting the job done. Some of these features improve the look and feel but might steal time (e.g., icons for documents), others are just great time savers (e.g., templates, including article writing in APA format! :-) ).

So, yeah, I’m going to update my Scrivener software and pay €25 for it. It’s worth it.

(On the other hand, I still keep a backup of my Scrivener 1.x program somewhere safe until I used it long term. And I will use it long term :-) ).

How to Write a Dissertation Thesis in a Month: Outlines, Outlines, Outlines

“Writing a book is an adventure: to begin with it is a toy and amusement; then it becomes a master, and than it becomes a tyrant; and the last phase is just as you are about to be reconciled to your servitude – you kill the monster and fling him to the public.”
Winston Churchill

Last year I took a vacation for a month to write my dissertation thesis. And it took me that one month to come up with the first draft, which made it into the final version with only minor alterations (but a lot of error checking). While the lack of major alterations might be in part due to my academic advisers (and my) wish to finish the work as soon as possible, I think the major part of this is due to the way it was written, or rather structured.

Doing a dissertation thesis is a major project, the writing itself is a different but not less complicated animal. I think it is a mistake to start writing in sentences unless you know the structure and the content. Once you write sentences, they stick together and are hard to change. And I think it is nearly impossible to write a 200+ pages work if you do not structure it beforehand, and there is a great way to do so: Outlines.

Most people know outlines from school. Many teachers try to give this valuable hint for exams. Plan what you write before you start writing. An outline for a dissertation is similar, but not quite the same. For one thing, it is much more detailed.

How detailed? Well, everything you want to write later should be included in it, without the actual sentences. Metaphorically it should contain the bones of the text, the whole skeleton, and hints for everything else. This means

  • the order you want to write the different pieces of information that make your theory
  • the notes you made about your studies, the design, the participants, the instruments, the procedure
  • the results of any statistical analysis you made
  • the ideas for and the issues you want to raise in the discussion

It also includes any notes you do not want to forget and any ideas, e.g., for further studies even if you cannot realize them (a valuable hint from my informal academic adviser: you will have ideas of things you want to realize but you cannot realize everything, so make notes and raise these points in “future work”).

Given that the outline only contains the information, but not the sentences, it is easily changeable. And once you get in the flow of adding flesh to the bones, you can write really fast. An additional benefit of using outlines: I used the same outline as a basis for the articles I wrote about my dissertation. The outline also allows you to focus only on the relevant part by using the hierarchical structure: You can arrange the information similar to the structure you use for your PhD thesis and simply fold in the parts you do not need at the moment. This way, thousands of lines of text become easily manageable. For example, you can fold the parts between the introduction and the discussion to write parts of the discussion while simulateneously seeing parts of the introduction. Sure, you could do something similar with Word’s “split view”, but not as easy and with this focus on the parts you want to see.

Personally, my outline for my dissertation was a 66.5 MB Circus Ponies Notebook file, containing 333,215 words (> 2.2 million characters, equivalent of about 1305 pages). I made sure to write down everything I did, the results of any analysis, etc. It was more or less structured in the way I wanted to write my dissertation. With this outline next to my writing program (Scrivener), it was possible to come up with a good first draft within a month. Why? Because I first read the whole outline, taking care to move the information that did not fit where it was to the correct place, then sorted each sub-point (e.g,, theory, results of Study 1) in the correct order, and then used this sorted outline that contained all the information I needed to write it as a guideline to write that chapter. Given that the sources were marked in the outline (see Academic Workflow) I did not have to check other sources for the actual writing. I didn’t even have to re-check statistical printouts — it was all in that one huge outline (and then in a smaller one that dealt only with the chapter).

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I created the outline before I started to write, during the last year of my PhD. But thinking back, it would have been much easier to create the outline during the whole PhD thesis time, as soon as the topic and the first experiments were decided. Noting the decisions (and the reasons for doing so), the results, etc. while planning and doing the studies would have made it much easier in the end, but it also worked this way.

So, I can only highly recommend creating a detailed outline prior to writing and using it for the writing process. It makes an insanely complex work manageable. :-)

Change the Medium

There is a beautiful but deeply sad scene in “The Vampire Lestat” where Nicholas tries to learn to play the violin. Sad, because he started so late in his life with it, he can never achieve the dexterity necessary to play it well. That is, until he is bitten by Lestat and is turned into a vampire.

I think his situation before being bitten is a fitting analogy to all those people who have countless works of art in their minds but cannot realize them. Perhaps they see paintings but cannot draw. Perhaps they listen to their own music but cannot play. Perhaps they see stories in their minds like watching movie reels but they cannot tell them, because they cannot write a book and they find no-one to listen to them. They are cursed with great works of art they cannot realize unless a miracle happens (if you can being bitten that). But a miracle is not necessarily needed.

Sometimes all that is needed is a change in the medium itself — and not in the person who is trying to perform that work of art.

Some people try to sing until they realize that they are better songwriters than singers. Others, like a character in “The Wrong Boy”, try in vain to find the instrument that gives their hidden melodies a voice, until they realize that they could have sung the tunes all the time. Others struggle with painting until they realize that they can better use their eye for colors for interior decoration, where the left hand for the paintbrush is no disadvantage.

Personally, I like writing stories in the form of short stories and novels, but I found that sometimes I cannot write down what I see behind my eyes. At least, not as short stories or novels. But I can write down what happens in that mind movie in the form of a movie script. This makes sense. It is a story, a movie, that I see behind my eyes, and how best to capture it than to write down what happens as a script.

I found this out accidentally when I played around with Scrivener and stumbled over the “Scriptwriting” Mode (in the “Text” menu). It gives you a document where the Enter key and the Tab key trigger different formatting as needed for script writing. It takes a few moments of getting used to it, but with the explanation in the footer bar, which describes the current formatting and the types of formatting triggered by either Tab or Enter (e.g., Scene Heading, Action, Character, Parenthetical, Dialogue, Transition, Shot, General Text, and General Text (Centered)) you can get quickly into writing this way.

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So, instead of being cursed to have stories in my mind I cannot tell, I jot them down as scripts and not as short stories or novels. Perhaps I turn them into short stories or novels one day. The good thing about these scripts is that they perfectly capture the movie I saw in my head. But perhaps not. But it is better than just letting them vanish into nothing and never having even the tiniest chance to realize them.

After all, few people are happy enough to be bitten by friend, gaining the skill in an instant, and then happily slaughtering an audience of gypsies as refreshment after the first act. ;-)

Circus Ponies Notebook and Scrivener for Writing

Quick Summary: Short remark about two of my favorite programs for writing projects.

Steve Jobs once said: “Computers are bicycles for the mind.”.

Circus Ponies Notebook and Scrivener exemplify this sentence for me.

I could not have written my diploma thesis without Circus Ponies Notebook and I wouldn’t have been able to finish my PhD thesis without both Circus Ponies Notebook and Scrivener. Continue reading

Scrivener — A perfect program for dissertation writing

Quick Summary: Describing my favorite writing program — Scrivener — and its strengths for writing of longer academic texts.

I have already recommended Scrivener in the references of “Organizing Creativity”, but writing my dissertation thesis with it has led me to recommend it once more: It is simply an awesome, awesome, really awesome program.
Note: It’s now available as Version 2.x and still the best tool I know for writing.

No kidding — I wrote “Organizing Creativity” with it, which was over 400 pages long, had 138.105 words and 785.500 characters, and it was still very easy to find the thread or specific spots where I wanted to change something. Now my dissertation thesis has 45.531 words and 288.429 characters and still isn’t finished — and I just cannot cope with the love for this program.

Granted, without Circus Ponies Notebook I would not have been able to write my dissertation, it helped me so much organizing all the material, all the literature, and all the countless results and statistical analysis, but when it comes to actual writing, Scrivener is just the reigning and undefeated champion.

First, let’s give a quick overview of what Scrivener looks like: Continue reading